Dangling

ok, there are allot of things wrong with this drawing. To start off with the boys legs are too small, his hair is flat when it should be hanging downwards like his arms, the shirt should also be upto his neck because hes upsi-down and nodoys shirt thats like that unless if it is tucked in or they are holding it.
Also the snake needs some work on his shading, you have it compleastly wrong -_-'
Also the end of his tail is too small and there should be a flat part at the middle of the body becuase he is standing on something.
If you want me to i could draw you some red lines to help, just send me a note or something~